June 22, 2010
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i can't believe the words you said
baby, you kneeled on the concrete
where i kissed you for the first time
please the words want to say
that you will goin to ask me
what will complete my dreams
my prince charming, i love you
baby, please i hope you will
me to take your hand
me and you forever and always
baby, you are my world
and my prince
ohhhhhh i'm looking into your eyes
so blue like the ocean
as i held you before
looking at the sunset
laying on the rocks
glazing at the stars,babe
you pull my hands in yours
fingertips on my body
when your fingertips take my face
kis syou so sweetly like candy
you unwrap the ring
baby, you ask to be my man
for forever until the end
i said, I LOVE YOU
as simple as the three words
and 8 simple letters
to spend my life with you

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justwannabeme said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:38 pm

hey. you asked me to check out your work. and you are absolutley amazing. :) way better than mine. haha. keep writing!! :)


asiangurl replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 6:50 pm
awww thank you, it means alot. n dont say dat, you got great writings. allrite, keep up ur work:) ill be reading
Squishy-Squish said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 8:11 pm
→Great way to express emotions. Good flow. Fits like a puzzle :)
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:02 pm
thank you squishy squish
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 7:29 am
wow i really like how heartfelt and amazing this is!!! your telling a story whichi think is always cool in a poem-well not a story but a scene-but i still lke it:) also i love how you worded everything its very clever!!! Please check out and comment on some of my work when u get the chance!!:)
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:02 pm
awww thank you:)
bbygurl21 said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 5:21 pm
i love this poem so much you are an amezing writter keep it up
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 3:12 pm
awww thanks...i really meean it. it means a lot:)
bbygurl21 replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 12:57 pm
you welcome huney anytime
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