Uncovered

May 31, 2010
By BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't live one day without."


Some people see me as…
Nothing other than a heartless sole,
Nothing other then ruthless,
A maniac; insane,

No one ever sees me uncovered,
No one ever sees me,

Deep down is a small child,
Who always wants to cry,
Who is broken beyond repair,
Who sometimes just wants to be understood,
But never is,

Who has to be strong,
All the time,
And has to become something she isn't,
Just to not be stepped on,

And who above all,
Just wants someone who understands her,
Uncovered…



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on Jan. 3 2011 at 4:14 pm
BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't live one day without."

I appreciate your critique and rating thank you very much

on Jan. 3 2011 at 4:13 pm
BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't live one day without."

thank you I will

on Jan. 3 2011 at 4:13 pm
BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't live one day without."

Thank you :)

on Jan. 3 2011 at 4:12 pm
BrokenUnbroken PLATINUM, ...., New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't live one day without."

thank you and I even find it sad, I can't read this without crying because I remember how i felt when writting this.. I'm glad you like it though

on Aug. 8 2010 at 10:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I really like this captain. its relatable and understandble and commentable in which sense i can say "that was good, I like that. 5 stars.

on Jul. 4 2010 at 8:14 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
8 articles 2 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

→True true. Guess many people feel like this, I know I have. Awesome poem, keep writting :)

on Jul. 2 2010 at 11:17 pm
krissy775 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a reason"

GREAT POEM~!~ I LOVE THIS! this is rly great....!

on Jul. 2 2010 at 5:23 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

this is a sad poem but i can relet to it a lot


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