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I want to tell you everything
But I don’t ‘cause I know it’d cause you pain
I scream and hate you ‘cause you’re leaving
Then remember that I’m just insane

I don’t give a damn about distance
Can’t you see that my heart’s torn in two?
I only want you to be happy but
I feel like I’ll die without you

I know that every step I take
I’ll see your face
And even in summer
I’ll be cold
Without your arms around me
There will be nothing that this world could hold

I hate you because you’re leaving
I hate you because I’m breaking
I hate you for abandoning me
I hate you because you can’t see

That I love you
Don’t leave without me
I love you
Please don’t desert me
I love you
I’ll go anywhere
Just don’t leave without me
I’m down on my knees
I’m begging you, please

Don’t condemn me to this fate

Of nothing
I’m nothing without you
I’m nothing
If I can’t see you
I’m nothing
If I can’t hear your voice
I’m nothing
Without your arms holding me tight

Just promise me
Promise me
Promise me
It’ll be alright

I’m already nothing
I’ve given you everything
I’m nothing
My life is in your hands
I’m nothing
Without you near me

Show me that you understand

Forgive me for hating you
I can’t help loving you so much
Forgive me for not letting go
I can’t survive without your touch

I’m scared
Everything’s changing
I know that you won’t stay
No matter how many tears I cry
Or how many times I scream

I love you
Don’t leave without me
I love you
Please don’t desert me
I love you
I’ll go anywhere
Just don’t leave without me
I’m down on my knees
I’m begging you, please
I love you

Don’t condemn me to this fate



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CourtneyLou said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:15 pm:
This is amazing!
 
unwrittenlove321 replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 2:01 am :
Thank you :)
 
CourtneyLou replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 12:26 pm :
your very welcome this is one of my favorites :)
 
unwrittenlove321 replied...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 10:39 am :
awww much appreciated. ^^
 
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krissy775 said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 11:21 pm:
HOLY CRAP! THIS IS AHHH-MAZING! this is so expanded, you really get your emotions into the poem! usually i like short poems but this totally changed my mind! keep writing!
 
unwrittenlove321 replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 3:03 am :
aww thank you so much! I'm glad you like it; it's nice to hear good reviews.  ^^
 
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