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crisp.
Just like the golden brown toast with peanut butter,
I for breakfast.

skin.
so leathery hard,
but raidiant gold
draws in every boy.

useless time,
wasted,
laying out to tan.

for what?
skin cancer?
you look great thats true.
but is it worth paying the price?

MMMMM gotta love me
that golden crisp girl,
like the taost with peanut butter
i eat for breakfast.





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wildcat said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 2:32 pm
thank you that means a lot to me... i actually screamed when i read your comment it made me so happy!
 
Kristinalynn J. said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 11:34 pm
very interesting.!! hahah funny too! i LOVE tanning! everyone always tell me ima get skin cancer..but i love my tan :P
 
Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 9:57 pm
so, i really liked this. i dont normally go for stuff like this, but this..this is great. keep it up
 
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