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May 13, 2010
By Kristina Wall BRONZE, Greensboro, North Carolina
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I wanna be free,
so i can learn more,
about my future,
and about the whole world.
I dont wanna be inside,
around four walls,
doing nothing immportant,
just sitting on the floor.
I wanna be able to get out the door,
and feel the hot summer heat,
and i don't want to feel weak.
I know i cannot see,
but doesn't mean i cannot be free.
Im just a child like everybody else,
i wish i could be somewhere else.

© Mary Claire J., Wichita Falls, TX

The author's comments:
Its about somebody who is blind, and wants freedom. I wrote this piece because i liked it as a poem and it really made me understand that blind people have the right to talk to be out and have freedom. Mostly the poem is about a person who cannot see but he wishes that he would be able to do whatever like everybody else and the most immportant to be able to see the world, his future, people and everything else.
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Kristina Wall BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2012 at 11:44 am
Kristina Wall BRONZE, Greensboro, North Carolina
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thanks. I'm glad u liked it.
gabriella said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 9:59 pm
nice poem!!