love bug

This will be
the last time that I see him,
last time I say good byes,
the last time that I see,
those beautiful, longing eyes.
the last time that I hold him,
in a long and loving hug,
last time that I will hear him,
call me his love bug.
but it will be
the first time that I see him,
with these new and different eyes,
see what a jerk he really is,
and try not to cry.
the first time that I tell him,
he’s not the one for me,
the first time that I tell him,
i want to be set free.





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WritingLoverForever said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 2:28 pm
Very evocative. I love it.
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 10:36 am
thanks:D           
 
emmilove24 said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 7:42 pm
This is so beautiful. so simple. you dont even have to say anything else to get the point across :) really reaches out to me!
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:06 pm
thank you:D
 
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