holds the truth

A drop of water
On the floor
Weighing nothing
Anymore.
Smooth as glass
Cool and clear
A drop of water
Lying there.
It holds the truth
It holds the pain
Never to
Return again.
Salty and wet
Loose and free
Causing no more
Trouble for me.





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 6:07 pm
I like this one captain. i love the line that says weighing nothing anymore. 5 stars. oh um, i dont know why you cant find stormhawks. i found it. all you do is type in the title, you wont find it if you type in the author name cause its under anonymous. i'd just love the feedback.
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 11:00 am
thank you(: and yeah ill try to find it again and ill definitly comment.
 
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