fire in my veins

June 2, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.


You took the blue from my eyes,
Healed the scars from my skin,
Took away my longing cries,
Kissed the tears off my chin.
You showed me right,
Showed me wrong,
Gave me a place,
To belong.
You captured the fire in my veins,
Captured the pain from far apart,
Captured the anger in my brain,
Captured the love in my heart.



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on Feb. 5 2011 at 12:15 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thank you! and im sure you will:)

spiria BRONZE said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 7:49 pm
spiria BRONZE, Fullerton, California
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Wow you're great. I hope someday I'll be able to write a love poem......but first I have to experience it. :)

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:45 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

aww thank you so much! :)

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:16 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Wow! This is so sweet.  I love your poems.  They're so simple, but they speak a million words.  =]

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:22 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thank you so much! (:

Trio123 GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 5:22 pm
Trio123 GOLD, Sunnyvale, California
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beautifully written!

on Oct. 11 2010 at 10:09 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

aw): and ill totally read like everything you have! lol

on Oct. 10 2010 at 2:33 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Aw, this is really nice. So sweet. But it made me sad, because it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend of almost one year, who I'm still deeply in love with even after he broke up with me. By the way, could you maybe check out my poem about him? It's titled "The One I Call Mine."

on Sep. 26 2010 at 6:23 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thank you so much!!

on Sep. 26 2010 at 5:39 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

Wow, ur a great poet. I'd love to read more.




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