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La la la la laaa
Isnt today a great day,
The suns shining,
The birds are chirping.
Ah today is really a good day
You told me im beautiful,
I bought a diamond bracelet

Then it changed

It started to Rain,
Lightning struck
It rained for hours,
You changed,
No more love
No more compliments,
Nada
It turned a good day to a horrible nightmare





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LostAngel said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 12:11 pm
love the point. Wish you drew the poem out a little more but it's good either way :)
 
Dominicangirl replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 12:28 pm
Thank you, this just came to me like most of the poems i write :)
 
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