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Promise

I make this promise now,
To love you forever.
My heart is gold,
My heart is yours.
I'll hold you close in the darkest hours
And wait for the light to show your precious smile.



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ThatClarinetPerson said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 10:55 am:
i dont know. it's kind of meh. :/
 
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 7:40 pm :
what don't you like about it Sophie?
 
ThatClarinetPerson replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 9:11 am :
well, there's a lot of this love stuff published, which is part of it. um, i'm really really sorry if it isn't but it seems kind of.....fake?
 
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 6:56 am :
Sophie I understand where you are coming from and we are all entitled to our opinions. So no it is not fake but I can understand why it sounds that way. I am sorry that I added to the headache of love poems.
 
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BetterThatYaDidntKnoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 7:35 pm:
awwww :) that was very sweet. ur word choice was cute too!
 
The_Princess_of_Moronica replied...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 9:05 am :
Thank you    
 
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Ceneteros2804 said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 8:05 pm:
Wow this is really good.  It really shows true emotion
 
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia replied...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 8:30 pm :
Thanks David:) I think I shall stick to poetry and leave the stories to you and the experts
 
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