Promise

June 2, 2010

I make this promise now,
To love you forever.
My heart is gold,
My heart is yours.
I'll hold you close in the darkest hours
And wait for the light to show your precious smile.



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on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:56 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Sophie I understand where you are coming from and we are all entitled to our opinions. So no it is not fake but I can understand why it sounds that way. I am sorry that I added to the headache of love poems.

on Oct. 16 2010 at 9:11 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

well, there's a lot of this love stuff published, which is part of it. um, i'm really really sorry if it isn't but it seems kind of.....fake?

on Oct. 15 2010 at 7:40 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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what don't you like about it Sophie?

on Oct. 2 2010 at 10:55 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

i dont know. it's kind of meh. :/

on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:05 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thank you    

on Sep. 30 2010 at 7:35 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwww :) that was very sweet. ur word choice was cute too!

on Sep. 25 2010 at 8:30 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks David:) I think I shall stick to poetry and leave the stories to you and the experts

on Sep. 25 2010 at 8:05 pm
Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM, Griffith, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocre minds.' Albert Einstein

'Why write about reality, we all know how that story ends' Me

Wow this is really good.  It really shows true emotion




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