The Girl That Cried Suicide

June 2, 2010
By Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"


I hear people talk behind my back
They think I can’t hear there whispers
I hold back my tears
I grab my books to only have them knock them down
I glide out of the cramped classroom, and let my dark hair cover my face and thoughts


Home is hell
I’m the oldest
I sometimes think that I’m the adult, the parent
Babies crying, screaming, destroying my clear thoughts
Mother sits on the table, drinking pulling out needles
I look at her with despair, trying to show the hurt and pain I have through my eyes
Dad, never home
“Working” is his excuse

Finally, the night
Where the silence is my music
Where the wind whispers my thoughts
And where the darkness is my light

Tears roll down my face
I place the rope around my neck
I’m on my tiptoes,
My tears sound like breaking glass as they crash against the wooden floor
The rope feels like fire on my skin,
But the feel of it is relieving my pain
I take my last breath,
And
Jump.



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on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:33 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Lol, thank yhuuu :)

 


on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:32 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Im glad yhu liked iht :)

on Sep. 11 2010 at 11:18 pm
DancerBabe SILVER, Tuscarawas, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." -Eleanor Roosevelt
"Bad writers plagerize, good writers steal!"

That was really good! it gave me goose bumps!

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:24 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow i can so feel the emotion

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:27 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:10 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

Love it, keep up the great work

on Jul. 7 2010 at 12:17 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

No ihts not, iht just came too me i guess

BeloveD SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 9:33 pm
BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something, let it be. If it doesn't come back to you, it was never ment to be.

brilliant! it gave me goose bumps... wow.. is it a true story? in some one else's perspective?

on Jun. 30 2010 at 2:58 pm
JustKeepFalling GOLD, Byron, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe that happy girls are the prettiest girls. I believe that tomorrow is another day and I believe in miracles.”

This is a beautiful intreging piece of work. Bravo! Keep up the work and maybe check out some of mine sometime =)


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