The Girl That Cried Suicide

June 2, 2010
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I hear people talk behind my back
They think I can’t hear there whispers
I hold back my tears
I grab my books to only have them knock them down
I glide out of the cramped classroom, and let my dark hair cover my face and thoughts

Home is hell
I’m the oldest
I sometimes think that I’m the adult, the parent
Babies crying, screaming, destroying my clear thoughts
Mother sits on the table, drinking pulling out needles
I look at her with despair, trying to show the hurt and pain I have through my eyes
Dad, never home
“Working” is his excuse

Finally, the night
Where the silence is my music
Where the wind whispers my thoughts
And where the darkness is my light

Tears roll down my face
I place the rope around my neck
I’m on my tiptoes,
My tears sound like breaking glass as they crash against the wooden floor
The rope feels like fire on my skin,
But the feel of it is relieving my pain
I take my last breath,

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DancerBabe said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 11:18 pm
That was really good! it gave me goose bumps!
Dominicangirl replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:33 pm

Lol, thank yhuuu :)


crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 4:24 pm
Wow i can so feel the emotion
Dominicangirl replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:32 pm
Im glad yhu liked iht :)
LostAngel said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 12:10 pm
Love it, keep up the great work
Dominicangirl replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 12:27 pm
JustKeepFalling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 2:58 pm
This is a beautiful intreging piece of work. Bravo! Keep up the work and maybe check out some of mine sometime =)
BeloveD replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 9:33 pm
brilliant! it gave me goose bumps... wow.. is it a true story? in some one else's perspective?
Dominicangirl replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 12:17 pm
No ihts not, iht just came too me i guess
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