May 27, 2010
By Anonymous

Family man
Pictures of kids
Happy as can be
But despises me
Can’t look at us when he talks
Has a real strut to his step
As he walks
Eyes popped out
Watching you breathe
He doesn’t like me
Because I don’t believe
In a holy man watching us all
Sorry I rather take care of my problems
Than ask a man in the clouds
To show me the path.
I know it’s rude to ask
But please sir
Why do you believe?

The author's comments:
my world religions teacher. just a free verse poem i wrote about him.

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on Jun. 30 2010 at 7:49 am
DubiousDamsel BRONZE, Weddington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me if I scare them first." -- Lady Gaga

"I'm not afraid of dying. Total peace after death, becoming someone else is the best hope I've got." -- Kurt Cobain

Awesome. The only problem I can see is "Sorry I rather" - I think it'd make more sense if it was "Sorry, I'd" or "Sorry I would." But it's just a suggestion :) Really great work!


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