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my first published poem (: "love"

May 26, 2010
By travisw BRONZE, Cloverdale, Other
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love is like a tree sometimes long
sometimes not
sometimes it gets pretty hot
sometimes it even seems wrong
but no matter what through and through wrong not is my love for you
i loved you once and still do today
please dont ever go away
grow old, forevermore
girl just dont walk out that door
stay with me 10-life
without fear of the reapers scythe
live together
cant live forever
die together
together...forever

© Margaret K., Andover, MA

The author's comments:
i dont really know one of my friends sort of inspired me and i was thinking bout my girlfriend at the time so why not just put my thoughts into something artisticle eh?
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