What is it then!!!

May 30, 2010
By YoungCricket101 BRONZE, Apple Valley, California
YoungCricket101 BRONZE, Apple Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Do or Donot there is no try"

You don’t like your stuff being touched, but you say it’s not about trust Then what is it about Is it that I’m your ex or that I’m just a pest What is it Is it that I’m annoying or that your brother may be off moping What is it about You hurt my feelings when you said “ Can’t you get that through your head, No offense” Forget no offense That hurt me so bad and that’s why I stormed off mad maybe deep down I was even sad You say you love me I bet your lieing My hand hurts from writing, but what am I supposed to do I guess I’ll just move on and be upset till the end.

The author's comments:
A guy hurt his ex-girlfriends feelings and is being really rude to her so this piece is about how she feels.

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Nanny said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 1:48 pm
One of life's biggest challenges is to deal with sad feelings.  May it pass quickly when it happens.

Auntie G. said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 3:14 pm
You misspelled lying (put lieing) in first "poem", don't use punctuation and it was a bit depressing. I did like how you said (word choices) what you said. CHEER UP!!! Love, Auntie G.

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