Me or You!!!

May 30, 2010
By YoungCricket101 BRONZE, Apple Valley, California
YoungCricket101 BRONZE, Apple Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Do or Donot there is no try"


It’s not me it’s not you it’s not us
But are we true; true to each other
Not telling lies everyday of our lives
Are we equal people in their minds?
Does it matter……………………Yes
We don’t want to look like fools
Come back to me when were older
And I’ll let you know
If we can be together again
Or just be friends to the end


The author's comments:
This is about a girl wanting to break up with her boyfriend who she loves very much

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Nanny said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 1:49 pm
I liked this one!

Auntie G. said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 3:17 pm
THIS was more positive and a better arrangement of the poem overall. BETTER, Love G.




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