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Fading fingers on the glass,
Footsteps yield to tide,
Acid burns at heavy heart,
Light in dark resides.





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MercedesXO said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:05 pm
short and powerful. great job:)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:57 pm
Thankyou!!!    
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 11:39 am
awesome!  i love it
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 8:28 pm
Thanks sooo much!!!
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 1:04 am
this is very nice captain. 5 stars. you have.........
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 8:29 pm
Thankyou!!!!!!
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 9:09 pm
oui that...
 
Asianflowers said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:57 pm
Short but sweet! You said a lot in four lines. It gives me a floating feeling. Awesome!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 8:29 pm
Wow!! thankyou soo much!!!
 
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