Love, Again

May 29, 2010
By terrong SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
terrong SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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I dove, down, down, and even further down, into the deepest depths of your very soul. What I found, was indescribable. The most beautiful sea, painted in a strangely somber, livid shade of grey. A sun, almost as if placed there by Picasso himself, clinging to it's home in the mid-day sky. And that's when I noticed, everything had ceased. There were no waves anymore, no birds, and not a single person. Everything had simply... stopped. Now, I think I know why. You've stopped caring. Loving. You're an indifferent, apathetic shell of what you were. Until you let love in, nothing can proceed.

The author's comments:
I think I should make this a divorce letter, so it could have characters, and real emotion, yah know?

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on Jun. 28 2010 at 12:48 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

"so it could have characters and real emotion, I know........"-anyway......I like this captain. 5 stars. I dont know why I read the quotes. I really shouldn't bother........




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