How Does It Feel?

May 29, 2010
By Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have


How does it feel?
Are you hurting?
In constant excruciating pain that just keeps growing inside you.
Do you hate yourself?
Knowing you'll be scarred for life.
Wishing that there was a way to bandage the wound and fix the hole that its made inside you.
Wanting to set back the clocks of time, and change everything from beginning to end.
Some people think that you're crazy.
But to you, they just don't understand...they don't know how it feels.
If there's one thing you could change, it would be how you've become.
Because you're afraid...
to start over and make things new.
So how does it feel,
to have you're heart ripped out?


The author's comments:
I guess this piece was inspired by the thought of love, and the emotions that come with it.
I'm not in love though.lol
I just wanted to write about it.

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Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:41 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have

haha. i will

 


on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:54 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

oui oui captain. do your dance.

Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 2:49 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have

haha. well thanks for the compliment.

maybe i do feel like that when i write


on Jul. 1 2010 at 3:27 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i know captain, thats why i like your stuff. thats a good way to write, or a good way to feel when you're writing.

Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 1:14 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have

Haha. wow. Do i really??

Thats a good way to describe my writing.

 


on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:28 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you sound bitter and angry like you want revenge and you're watching a helpless guy get mawed by a bear like"well what do you know, you're dying. oh well, so how does it feel". you sound so nonchalant about it and teeth griting at the same time.

Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 12:20 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have

who do i sound like??

on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci captain.

on Jun. 28 2010 at 7:36 pm
HollyGolightly BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was born with an enormous need for affection and a terrible need to give it." - Audrey Hepburn

That was very beautiful. Keep doing what your doing.

Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 2:59 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have

thanks very much!!

on Jun. 28 2010 at 12:43 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you know what you sound like? I'm not even going to tell you what you sound like.-this is very nice captain. 5 stars.

 



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