Leaving You Behind

May 29, 2010
By WannaBeWriternumbertwo BRONZE, Brooklyn Park, Minnesota
WannaBeWriternumbertwo BRONZE, Brooklyn Park, Minnesota
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He stepped out of the shadows,
Secrets bared and told,
I left him in the light,
Not caring if he was cold.

He lied and didn't care,
Left me just in tears,
Called my girls and told them all you said,
How you broke my heart and wished you were dead.

Maybe it was me,
Who finally ended us,
But I am glad it's over,
Who ever broke it up.

I am glad it's done,
Never have to see your face,
I hope you get hurt soon,
Good-bye and never again.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece when I started a new school and had to leave behind all of my friends. Transitioning has been hard, but really helped me mature.

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on Jun. 19 2011 at 7:31 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This was a really good poem!  I can understand how leaving your friends behind would be hard.  Keep writing! :)

on Aug. 6 2010 at 7:53 pm
FantasyWriter17, Rialto, California
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this is very insightful i like it

on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:49 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

This is well written. would you mind commenting on some of my work?




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