something about you

May 29, 2010
By janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
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Favorite Quote:
treat others the way you would want to be treated


their is something about you
thats keeping me from thinking
about anything else
your eyes
your smile
i dont know what
my mind wabbles
and i cant keep my thoughts bottled
i need to know now
i need to know how
is it a spell
cause this is not ordinary
you have me feeling immortal
my wounds healing internally
my future is brighter
you made a fighter
tell me now
tell me how
what is it about you?


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on Jun. 27 2010 at 9:28 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow this is so amazing!! i can so feel the emotion!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!




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