True love

May 29, 2010
By krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life


I lost you
In a storm you were gone
No good byes
I love you
Forever and always I will
You took my heart
You took it with you
Mashed it
So I could only love you
You hunt me
You’re my living ghost that never lives
You destroy my fancies
You massacre my dreams
You and your little sceams
You sucked my sanity
Like a viper leaving nothing behind
I wanted to scream inside
But you just a bided
I miss you everyday
I wake up 1000 miles away
Standing in pieces
So far away
I am empty
Never complete
Like a beat
To my favorite song
That I can never sing along
Is you voice
Your eyes
Sparkle like the waters
Turning into poison
Your touch
Sinks into me
That controls me to do what you want
Shivering me to my core
But why do I love you
I let you in
Knowing what going to happen
I ignore it
And fall for you
So hard it begins
Begins to break me
Choke me
Steal me away
Until I am floating
Then I drop like a cannonball
You said forever
I believed you
No matter how hard I try
All I want to do is cry
All this pain
That is making me insane
It tears me up
Like hungry wolves
With one little deer
All because of you
The one that ever leaves my mind
The one so far way
You have me
Forever and always


The author's comments:
I really like this guy who moved away to North Carolina i have talk to him twice since he moved. and i my feeling never went away. and one day my friend shows me that hes dating some one like a week after he told me how much he "miss" me. so i still like to this day witch the poem explains. i hope you guys like it

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 2:56 pm
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life

i so glad it touched you. but i am sorry that guy did that to you.

on Jul. 14 2010 at 4:20 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

this is beautiful it touched me so bad because i feel in love and that guy broke my heart 2 days latter.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 11:56 pm
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life

thank you for commenting on my work it means alot to me that you like it. and i will look at your stuff.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 2:12 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

The best poetry is written from the heart! and this IS very good, so thank you for writting it! (:

on Jun. 30 2010 at 2:08 pm
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life

thanks so much! It was hard to write this because it ment so  much to me. so thank you i am glad you it.

on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:06 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is a very good peice. Its very dramatic, and i love it. You should check out some of my stuff I think you would like it!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow!! i love the emotion and feeling and depth!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!


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