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I lost you
In a storm you were gone
No good byes
I love you
Forever and always I will
You took my heart
You took it with you
Mashed it
So I could only love you
You hunt me
You’re my living ghost that never lives
You destroy my fancies
You massacre my dreams
You and your little sceams
You sucked my sanity
Like a viper leaving nothing behind
I wanted to scream inside
But you just a bided
I miss you everyday
I wake up 1000 miles away
Standing in pieces
So far away
I am empty
Never complete
Like a beat
To my favorite song
That I can never sing along
Is you voice
Your eyes
Sparkle like the waters
Turning into poison
Your touch
Sinks into me
That controls me to do what you want
Shivering me to my core
But why do I love you
I let you in
Knowing what going to happen
I ignore it
And fall for you
So hard it begins
Begins to break me
Choke me
Steal me away
Until I am floating
Then I drop like a cannonball
You said forever
I believed you
No matter how hard I try
All I want to do is cry
All this pain
That is making me insane
It tears me up
Like hungry wolves
With one little deer
All because of you
The one that ever leaves my mind
The one so far way
You have me
Forever and always




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bbygurl21 said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 4:20 pm:
this is beautiful it touched me so bad because i feel in love and that guy broke my heart 2 days latter.
 
krazykelsey replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 2:56 pm :
i so glad it touched you. but i am sorry that guy did that to you.
 
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lostnhim said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 9:06 pm:
This is a very good peice. Its very dramatic, and i love it. You should check out some of my stuff I think you would like it!
 
krazykelsey replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 2:08 pm :
thanks so much! It was hard to write this because it ment so  much to me. so thank you i am glad you it.
 
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 2:12 pm :
The best poetry is written from the heart! and this IS very good, so thank you for writting it! (:
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 8:03 pm:
Wow!! i love the emotion and feeling and depth!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!
 
krazykelsey replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 11:56 pm :
thank you for commenting on my work it means alot to me that you like it. and i will look at your stuff.
 
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