A Chance

May 29, 2010
By BooBoo95 SILVER, Spencer, West Virginia
BooBoo95 SILVER, Spencer, West Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
-I'm probably the coolest dork you'll ever meet.
-I'm 99% sure he doesn't like me, it's that 1% that keeps me hanging on.
-The woman came from a mans rib, not from his feet to be walked on,not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal, under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved


what to say?what to do?
how to say what I feel for you.
Do you notice how I grasp,
every moment with you to last?

Just to look into your eyes,
makes my heart dance with butterflies.
Will you care whats in my heart,
Should I chance to tear apart?

I feel you smile and gazing eyes,
and wonder why you walk on by.
Should i feel this strongly for you?
But the real question is...
Do you feel it too?


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I felt ignored and not wanted...I think some teens can relate to this...

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on Jul. 20 2010 at 5:45 pm
BooBoo95 SILVER, Spencer, West Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
-I'm probably the coolest dork you'll ever meet.
-I'm 99% sure he doesn't like me, it's that 1% that keeps me hanging on.
-The woman came from a mans rib, not from his feet to be walked on,not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal, under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved

you should check out my new poem "One More" lol thanks

on Jun. 28 2010 at 8:59 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is great. I love it! And dont worry...Your not alone! I feel the same way sometimes. You should check out my poem the rain... I think you would like it... (: Great job!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:55 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow i love it!!! so whimsical!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!

AbneyT SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:36 pm
AbneyT SILVER, Spring Valley, Illinois
8 articles 1 photo 8 comments
Aww, I like this one, it's just so cute and sweet. Wonderful writeeee! (:




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