Peace, War, Pie

May 29, 2010
By horsegirl27 GOLD, Los Angeles, California
horsegirl27 GOLD, Los Angeles, California
11 articles 5 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dog comes when called; a cat takes a message and gets back to you


Peace, war, pie
No one loves it more than I
When dragons come out
The magpies fly
The dragons, you see, end the peace
And then the war starts
and it won't decrease
Theres bodies lying
and blood and gore
This goes on a great much more
And just beyond heavens door
God is eating pie



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on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

that was crazy. I love it it. very nice concept. 5 stars-captain.

on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:48 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

hha i love it!!! it is so great and has such a hidden meaning!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:48 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

HAHA i love your title!!! I saw it, and i thought to myself, "I have to read that!" Of course, anything with pie i have to be involved. very good job with captivating your audience.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like.

keep writing!(:





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