Peace, War, Pie

May 29, 2010
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Peace, war, pie
No one loves it more than I
When dragons come out
The magpies fly
The dragons, you see, end the peace
And then the war starts
and it won't decrease
Theres bodies lying
and blood and gore
This goes on a great much more
And just beyond heavens door
God is eating pie





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 8:42 pm
that was crazy. I love it it. very nice concept. 5 stars-captain.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 7:48 pm
hha i love it!!! it is so great and has such a hidden meaning!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:48 am

HAHA i love your title!!! I saw it, and i thought to myself, "I have to read that!" Of course, anything with pie i have to be involved. very good job with captivating your audience.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like.

keep writing!(:

 
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