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When I fall
there's no one to catch me

When I break
there's no glue in sight

When I get lost
no one ever finds me

When I need an ear
all that's there is darkness

No one's there waiting for me
no one with glue
or a limb to cling on

When I fall
I break
because there's nothing to hold

I always break
into thousands of pieces
nothing less
nothing more

Is there a Guardian Angel left for me?
no
no one is there
just darkness
and an invisible limb

No one is there to
catch me
no one cares if a person falls

They just watch me break
over and over again

There's no one to catch me
so I keep falling





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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 8:38 pm
I love this captain. I like how it goes along with that other one you wrote. awesomeness captain. 5 stars.
 
mwahxandxmwa said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 7:34 pm

This poem really sets the scene for which you are portraying.

Awesome job...:D

 
AbneyT said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 7:23 pm

I love it (:

It really catches the reader's attention, and I feel like I can relate. Good write all together!!

 
Supernova7 said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 1:40 pm
It was very good nice job
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:35 am
oh wow -- i just read your previous poem, fallen angel, and at first i thought it was the same thing! but i continued reading and i realized that this one is from your perspective. that was such a creative thing to do! great work!
 
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