No One To Catch Me

May 29, 2010
By Jyo-jyo SILVER, Oakland, California
Jyo-jyo SILVER, Oakland, California
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am generally insane, unless I'm temporarily suffering from sanity.


When I fall
there's no one to catch me

When I break
there's no glue in sight

When I get lost
no one ever finds me

When I need an ear
all that's there is darkness

No one's there waiting for me
no one with glue
or a limb to cling on

When I fall
I break
because there's nothing to hold

I always break
into thousands of pieces
nothing less
nothing more

Is there a Guardian Angel left for me?
no
no one is there
just darkness
and an invisible limb

No one is there to
catch me
no one cares if a person falls

They just watch me break
over and over again

There's no one to catch me
so I keep falling

The author's comments:
remake of my poem Fallen Angel

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on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:38 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love this captain. I like how it goes along with that other one you wrote. awesomeness captain. 5 stars.

on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:34 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

This poem really sets the scene for which you are portraying.

Awesome job...:D


AbneyT SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:23 pm
AbneyT SILVER, Spring Valley, Illinois
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I love it (:

It really catches the reader's attention, and I feel like I can relate. Good write all together!!


on Jun. 27 2010 at 1:40 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

It was very good nice job

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:35 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

oh wow -- i just read your previous poem, fallen angel, and at first i thought it was the same thing! but i continued reading and i realized that this one is from your perspective. that was such a creative thing to do! great work!


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