Fallen Angel

May 29, 2010
By Jyo-jyo SILVER, Oakland, California
Jyo-jyo SILVER, Oakland, California
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am generally insane, unless I'm temporarily suffering from sanity.


When you fall
I'll catch you

When you break
I'll have glue

When you get lost
I'll guide you

When you need an ear
I'll listen

When you need a friend
I'm here
waiting just for you

When you fall
I'll be there to catch you

I'll be there to catch you
because I don't want you
to break

You fragile Guardian Angel
who needs guarding herself

I'll be there to catch you
as no one did for me
because I will not
let an Angel fall

I will not let you break
not as many times as I
not even once

I just want you to know
I will be there to catch you
when there's no one to hold

The author's comments:
For my Space Heater.. Who might hate me for submitting this

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Jyo-jyo SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 11:14 pm
Jyo-jyo SILVER, Oakland, California
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am generally insane, unless I'm temporarily suffering from sanity.

thank you for the feedback 

Jyo-jyo SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 11:14 pm
Jyo-jyo SILVER, Oakland, California
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am generally insane, unless I'm temporarily suffering from sanity.

I'd love to be your friend!

on Jun. 28 2010 at 8:52 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg i totally <3 ur poem...it comforts me since i dont have friends lol will u be my friend :p

on Jun. 28 2010 at 11:38 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
46 articles 0 photos 231 comments
very good poem!  (one thing i'd change though is making the lines and how you put them together consistent)

on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:37 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love the message you're sending captain. do your dance.5 stars.

on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:26 pm
Maniacwriter SILVER, Haverhill, Massachusetts
9 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it is the way you treat the ones you have never met that define who you are as a person"

I LOVE IT , IT HIVES ME JOPEHOPE THAT THERE ARE ATILLSTILL GOOD TRUSTWORTHY PEOPLE OUT THERE. IT IS SUCH AN AMAZING PEICE OF WORK. KEEP WRITING!!!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:39 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow!! i love it!! its so tranquil and nice! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 5:06 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
28 articles 0 photos 186 comments
i love this, it's so beautiful and calm. check out my work if you want, im new here:)

on Jun. 27 2010 at 4:46 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

So sweet and calm very nice! :)

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:34 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

such a sweet poem. my favorite line is "i'll be there to catch you as no one did for me, because i will not let an angel fall." so touching and it really expresses your great character! check out some of my work, too if you'd like. keep writing! (:


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