power of love

April 23, 2010
By tetoond BRONZE, Takoma Park, Maryland
tetoond BRONZE, Takoma Park, Maryland
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Untouchable,invincible dats who I am
Nothing to fear just heading forward to my destiny
Moving through the deepest forest and highest mountains with no fear
Ready to fight and conquer cuz I am a warrior

Hungry to conquer dat land I have been waiting for my whole life
Painless are my wounds and struggle for I want it
Nothing can stop me and nothing would ever stop me
I am proud of that land and I can't do without it

In this land I am a king and an army
I am a warrior but with no weapon only my heart and my words to defend me
I am him who wants this land by all cost
This land is your heart and I would protect it like my life depends on
I am your lover the warrior and I love you forever


The author's comments:
i was inspired by my girl friend and i would just like to know peoples opinions about it,it was altered a little bit because i had her name on it but i would love to know that someone used my work to express his feelings to his love one.

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helenoliva said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 1:59 pm
this is so cute. its really inspirational and its a nice way to express what you feel for someone. luv it

Sman.D said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 6:29 pm
Hum...nice !!!

Livi21 said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 6:20 pm
This is so awsome. I usually am not that into poetry but this is definately worth reading

on Jun. 25 2010 at 6:03 pm
this is really cute. i love it

lexy eve said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 5:58 pm
That was lovely it makes me feel gd when reading it thanks  Bright 4 showing me this,dat was gd of u.

tetoond BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 2:37 pm
tetoond BRONZE, Takoma Park, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
thanks and thanks to my boo who gives me the inspiration

sbulaletti said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 2:22 pm
THIS IS AWESOME

on Jun. 25 2010 at 2:04 pm
the best author ever....im so glad he is in my life and i'm his inspiration. I love you coucou


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