Color in my eyes

May 27, 2010
By Chloe Owens-Hess SILVER, Park City, Utah
Chloe Owens-Hess SILVER, Park City, Utah
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Color in my eyes
The car zooms by.
Making the trees blur
and the road lines
zoom.

I count the cattle
in the field.
Watch the colors
of the trees

Reflect in my mind.

All the colors.
Zooming by.
Colors in me eyes.


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on Jun. 26 2010 at 8:43 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

O ok! Thanks so much no wonder it's seems to be taking so loooooong! Haha

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on Jun. 26 2010 at 7:50 pm
mr.fingers, Mount Hood/ Parkdale, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Our only problem is spilt wine.

It usually takes a month or so

on Jun. 26 2010 at 5:58 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

I like this. It's very pretty! I've a question, roughly how long did it take for teenink to approve this piece of poetry and any other poetry you may have submitted?

on Jun. 25 2010 at 7:02 pm
MaketheFlame GOLD, Queens Village, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Like an angel with two broken wings. Reach for the sky again. Like the devil, meant for better things. I will find my place on high"

Pretty beautiful. Nice closure at the end. I get a good mental image when I read this.


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