Color in my eyes

May 27, 2010
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Color in my eyes
The car zooms by.
Making the trees blur
and the road lines

I count the cattle
in the field.
Watch the colors
of the trees

Reflect in my mind.

All the colors.
Zooming by.
Colors in me eyes.

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alanacarlene said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 5:58 pm
I like this. It's very pretty! I've a question, roughly how long did it take for teenink to approve this piece of poetry and any other poetry you may have submitted?
mr.fingers replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 7:50 pm
It usually takes a month or so
alanacarlene replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 8:43 pm
O ok! Thanks so much no wonder it's seems to be taking so loooooong! Haha
MaketheFlame said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 7:02 pm
Pretty beautiful. Nice closure at the end. I get a good mental image when I read this.
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