Doing

June 13, 2010
By Kayla Mathisen BRONZE, Massapequa Park, New York
Kayla Mathisen BRONZE, Massapequa Park, New York
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Some people can sit for hours just... thinking, never talking.
Other people can sit for hours just talking without ever stopping to think.
Either way, it’s a waste of an hour- unless you spend that time doing.
Have you done something today?

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on Jun. 24 2010 at 11:40 am
Acaciatree410 SILVER, Waterford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
everything happens for a reason.

Wow.. hmm.. all I can say is that, it's beautiful, and very much true.. I think that people choose to not think and lie to themselves because it's easier than telling the truth, I think alot of people are afriad to think because they might find something out about themselves that they don't want to  hear or see. and you portrayed that in just a few simple lines... you're really good! =]


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