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Unheard Acceptance

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I can’t believe I’m doing this
I'm watching you walk away
Your back is turned
You’re on your way to a life
Without the burden of me
You left me with strangers
Nobody I knew
My life was your mistake
A damper on you life

A naive, ignorant child I was
however, growing up, experiencing life
my thoughts have grown less centered
around all things that were me
I started thinking about reasons
why’s and what-made-yous,
and I have thought long and
hard

you left when I was younger
I don’t really remember you
you don’t remember me at all
but, I love you

no matter what people believe
or try to make me believe
I love you, always have
I now understand you reasons
I get you point of view
you weren’t ready
to look after an infant
child, daughter

you hold a chunk of my heart
I cry for our lost relationship sometimes
and laugh at things I could picture us doing
but know now, please hear me
I forgive you
I love you
Rose,
my mother




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Kiersten said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 10:45 pm:
ok, well my sister was going through my poetry on here, and she told me that there are some spelling errors... i think everybody knows where they are, and i'm sorry for them... and does anybody know if you can fix something once its up? like editing and fixing typos?
 
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x-unknown said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 9:32 am:
This is amazing. To come to terms with that and create a work like this out of it is.... astounding. I would never have the strength to do that.
 
Kiersten replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:36 pm :
thank-you... i really appreciate it...
 
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Britney15 said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 9:15 am:
this is beautiful and sad i just like this poem i don't know why but it speaks to me
 
Kiersten replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:41 pm :
thanks... i was hard to write, but i think i got down what i wanted to...and thanks again for the comment :)
 
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