Caught me looking

May 22, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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True, you caught me looking
But I caught you looking back
You might see me hanging
At the places you are always at
If only you were feeling
The same way as I am
But you don’t seem to think of me
As anything more than a friend



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on Aug. 15 2010 at 11:30 pm
i really liked this poem its something i can relate 2 nd i think uve done a great job i also liked the rhythm it had id like 2 read more poems by u so keep writing :]

on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:00 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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this is really simple and obvious. but the rhythm of it is great!

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on Jun. 21 2010 at 9:57 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

This is amazing and ive had a similar experience so thank you for doing a beautiful job.


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