Caught me looking

May 22, 2010
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True, you caught me looking
But I caught you looking back
You might see me hanging
At the places you are always at
If only you were feeling
The same way as I am
But you don’t seem to think of me
As anything more than a friend

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nikkigonefishin said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 11:30 pm
i really liked this poem its something i can relate 2 nd i think uve done a great job i also liked the rhythm it had id like 2 read more poems by u so keep writing :]
kiwi12 said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 3:00 pm
this is really simple and obvious. but the rhythm of it is great!
kenna2013 said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 9:57 pm
This is amazing and ive had a similar experience so thank you for doing a beautiful job.
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