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him ........

May 25, 2010
By SweetThing SILVER, Paradox, New York
SweetThing SILVER, Paradox, New York
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"right now might be stormy weather but it cant rain forever"

I’m lost,
Don’t know how I let this happen.
Lost all I had,
Let it slip away.
Didn’t realize what I had,
Couldn’t see he was my world.
So I pushed him away,
In fear of a broken heart.
Tho now I realize;
I broke my own heart.
Now all I think about is him,
All I can picture in my mind,
Is the time we spent together.
And every little thing I do,
Brings back a memory.
Just wanna be US again,
Forget all this,
Start over.
Get that feeling all over;
With the butterflies,
And look in his eyes.
Wanna hear the sound,
Of his heart,
When he holds me close.
Or fill the empty spaces in his hand,
With mine.
That was when everything was mine,
I had it all,
But I let it slip away.
It can’t end this way,
All I need is 1 chance,
To make the love come back.
He said 4ever our love would last,
So y won’t he let me love him?

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 6:46 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like this! Very well-written, and I enjoy your "rant" style of writing--it fits right in with the poem's central message. Great work! Please read, rate and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot :) Thanks!

on Jun. 19 2010 at 5:39 pm
Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You heffer! or HOLY HEFFA!

WOAHH....that was good.... I am goingg thro the same feelings and everythingg now... It hurts but one of my best frends told me: yewr gonna g0 thro a million heartbrakes until the righht person  comes in to get yeww... I hope that helpeed a little bit... it helpeed me... read "fallingg inlove" and comment pleasee? its by meh nd i want yewr opinion...GREAAT POEM THO VERY SAD,BUT GREATT! yewr an amazingg writer (: