This Life

May 25, 2010
This life tears,
and this life rips.
It burns the soul
and tightens its grip.

The unexpected happens
and you feel like giving in.
You wish you were dead
and you wait for pain to begin.

You wonder why
the world is a living hell.
You rise to power
to know nothing ends well.

The glares you send
to the people you love
are because no one is there
for you in heaven above.

You lie on the floor
begging and pleading,
"Someone! Just end this,
my emotional bleeding!"

You show your anger
and feel your rage.
Why won't you forgive
and turn the page?

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IndigoE said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 8:34 pm
that's wonderful; the emotion really shines through. keep it up!
Secret_Love_Tells replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 4:58 pm
Thank you so much! I really think that this explains a lot in a teens life too... i mean we all have these moments.... you should check out some of my other things.
Echo16 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Excelent piece!!! I love the emotion you potrayed through your symbolism. Keep on writing!
Secret_Love_Tells replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 5:26 pm
thank you! A lot of emotion was put into this...
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:22 am

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u ♥

Secret_Love_Tells replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 5:26 pm
thank you so much! i'll check yours out!
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