To Be Loved

June 14, 2010
By Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales do not teach children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed.


sometimes, late at night
i remember what it's like
with you by my side
holding me tight
til the morning light.
loving me with all your might.
sometimes when i drive by
i remember what it's like
to curl up in your arms
that protect me from the world's harms
beneath the starry sky
under which you promised me your love.
sometimes when i cry
i remember what it's like
to have you wipe away my tears
as you fight off all my fears
with the taste of your lips
and feel of your touch
as your whispers proclaim your love.
sometimes late at night,
i remember what it's like
to be loved.



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Babie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 12:44 am
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

Hahaha I wrote ealking about insead of talking about. MY BAD

Babie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 12:42 am
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

renee does not know what she is ealking about. I love it keep it up. ^_^

jennece04 said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 2:42 am
jennece04, Hollywood, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Every great dream begins with a dreamer. Always remember, you have within you the strength, the patience, and the passion to reach for the stars to change the world.

wow this is sooo good

on Jun. 21 2010 at 7:11 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

amazing work!

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:51 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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kinda generic rhyming but it's good

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 12:48 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I've read so much, but when I read yours .. I actually lived through it.. I LOVE IT! I felt every line.. LOVE IT! GREAT JOB! God bless you!

 

Check out my work.. again LOVE yours!


on Jun. 19 2010 at 5:30 pm
Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
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You heffer! or HOLY HEFFA!

woah... i'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS POEM WUZZZZZ AMAZINGG !!!! yewr poems bloww mehh awayy.... (: i understodd yewr poem... please look up some  of my poemz and all nd comment? but YEW GOT SOME TRUE TALENTT!

on Jun. 19 2010 at 1:20 pm
Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales do not teach children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed.

thank you soooo much guys! your compliments mean the world! :)

GreenGirl13 said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 12:44 pm
I don't think so. I think it was beautiful and honest.

GreenGirl13 said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 12:28 pm
I don't think so. I think it was a beautiful and honest peom.

on Jun. 18 2010 at 8:25 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

i really like this poem it has so much meaning to it

JessieJ SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 4:38 pm
JessieJ SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\" Don\'t ever give up on something too important to lose.\"

i really like your poem it was honest and heart warming

on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:54 am
Elle_phant SILVER, Barnsley, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you more today, than yesterday but less than tomorrow." <3
"Lifes a climb, but the veiws great." :)
"Laundry is the only thing that should be seperated by colour." <3
"Age shouldn't matter if the pair truly love each other." :)

I love this poem, i really loved the rhyming scheme, but what i loved most was the emotion from the lyrics. (:

renee said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 9:29 am
this poeme quite sick maan!!it iz not good if a childz gonna read it. dont you think so?




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