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To Be Loved

sometimes, late at night
i remember what it's like
with you by my side
holding me tight
til the morning light.
loving me with all your might.
sometimes when i drive by
i remember what it's like
to curl up in your arms
that protect me from the world's harms
beneath the starry sky
under which you promised me your love.
sometimes when i cry
i remember what it's like
to have you wipe away my tears
as you fight off all my fears
with the taste of your lips
and feel of your touch
as your whispers proclaim your love.
sometimes late at night,
i remember what it's like
to be loved.





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jennece04 said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 2:42 am
wow this is sooo good
 
imrighthereyouknow said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 7:11 pm
amazing work!
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am
kinda generic rhyming but it's good
 
Shahed said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 12:48 am

I've read so much, but when I read yours .. I actually lived through it.. I LOVE IT! I felt every line.. LOVE IT! GREAT JOB! God bless you!

 

Check out my work.. again LOVE yours!

 
TrueLoveWaits This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 1:20 pm
thank you soooo much guys! your compliments mean the world! :)
 
xoxoskaterchickxoxo replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 5:30 pm
woah... i'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS POEM WUZZZZZ AMAZINGG !!!! yewr poems bloww mehh awayy.... (: i understodd yewr poem... please look up some  of my poemz and all nd comment? but YEW GOT SOME TRUE TALENTT!
 
ShytoyaB said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 8:25 pm
i really like this poem it has so much meaning to it
 
JessieJ said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 4:38 pm
i really like your poem it was honest and heart warming
 
Asif_by_magic said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:54 am
I love this poem, i really loved the rhyming scheme, but what i loved most was the emotion from the lyrics. (:
 
renee said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 9:29 am
this poeme quite sick maan!!it iz not good if a childz gonna read it. dont you think so?
 
GreenGirl13 replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 12:28 pm
I don't think so. I think it was a beautiful and honest peom.
 
GreenGirl13 replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 12:44 pm
I don't think so. I think it was beautiful and honest.
 
Babie replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 12:42 am
renee does not know what she is ealking about. I love it keep it up. ^_^
 
Babie replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 12:44 am
Hahaha I wrote ealking about insead of talking about. MY BAD
 
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