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we say best friends forever
we think it would last
until days pass by to suck our blast
the laughs we had and best time we spent
all these remain just memories we had
but memories fade away by time
and those we loved are replaced every once and a while
and so we wish for days to come back
the days we had with no regrets
of forgetting those who miss us behind our back...




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TerraTAZzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 6:28 am:
I Adore your style of writing, this poem flows so well and has such great meaningg. I love your work!!
 
Rulesofmyown replied...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 1:43 pm :
ohh thank youuu! really gladd u loved it:)
 
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V-ballChick said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 10:53 pm:
Wow and that last line... just i never thought of that before of how you sometimes forget that there might be others that miss you too i guess... I loved it really spoke out loud!
 
Rulesofmyown replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 5:50 am :
thank youuu:) really appreciate ur opinion, and glad u liked it:)
 
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MeganSeesStars This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 6:48 pm:
wow this really speaks to me, becasue i know how it feels. great job[:
 
Rulesofmyown replied...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 6:03 am :
thank youuu, i really appreciate it:):)
 
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