Just to much

May 21, 2010
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Sometimes i want to cry,
for no reason at all
I just hear,feel, see something and i cry
I hate showing my feelings or anything to people
I keep stuff to myself , but i have to much to keep inside
People always expect something from me
People want me to give them answers
People are always seeing the bad, never the good
Its uncomfortable
People seeing the worse and never dare give you props for the good
I feel like im being watched and graded
Everyone expects something from me,
This, that, this & that
Its exausting
Trying to make my family proud
but why try if they dont pay attention
I have to much on my mind to think about myself
Put people first, is what i do
Hearing my sister say this
My mom complain about that
Hearing my dad do this
Hearing my cousins live that
My aunt asking this
Uncles being protective about that
Its just to much

Somedays i laugh
Somedays i just ignore
Somedays i just cry
To much pressure
To much responsibility
When will it be my turn
My turn to live my life





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brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 11:38 am
it's good, except the vocabulary seems slightly broken and doesn't seem to fit quite right
 
Dominicangirl replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:35 pm
Thanks
 
snickerFeen96 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 10:03 am

ewww yhu have to send me nice comments dummy

anyways this is also one of mii favorite poems and sorry for the misspelling yhuh already noe that im not a good speller.

good thing yhu like it!yay!!!

only i hope other people like it too!!

 
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