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The Survivors

May 23, 2010
By Crystalmarie3_21 BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Crystalmarie3_21 BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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These hot steamy days, i want to be alone.
Too hot and bothered, to have people lying beneath me.
Actions causing rage, otherwise the sun shining down twice as hard!



Our nights are cool and moist.
Winds slowly increase, leaving goosebumps from head to toe.
We reach out for eachother, these dark; cool nights.



We start to smell the rain, as this storm approaches.
anxious yet slowly, creeping up on us.
Our night sky suddenly became bright.
Whats done in the dark, always comes to light!


This is where a gust of wind swoops in, knocks you down, and takes your breath away!
The winds are so strong, you feel as if you cant breath.
You are now swept away in a whorl wind of water, destroying anything in the way!


Whoosh! Bam! Crash!
Just as you think the storm is over, it picks up more speed!
All of the pressure of the water is coming down on our skin, like thousands of razor blades racing to the bone.
The pain is excruciaiting but its worth the fight!


In the end, Its just the two of us!
Everything around us damaged and destroyed, causing more frustarations.
But we stand tall, because we made it through this disaster!


The author's comments:
This is a showers and storms poem. I wrote this in my english class. Its about a real difficult love affair.Can anybody guess what type of storm in trying to describe?

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on Jul. 3 2010 at 11:43 am
Crystalmarie3_21 BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Its a hurricane. Thanks. Its about a relationship between two people. One of them is cheating, so they are snooping around. Everything always comesout between the two of them. They continue this, and fight for eachother, although theres much at risk.

on Jun. 16 2010 at 5:45 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

I really like your style and I can kinda understand what it's about, but not reaelly. So what is the storm trying to describe