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Oh, She Said

May 23, 2010
By MidoriMeanders SILVER, Canoga Park, California
MidoriMeanders SILVER, Canoga Park, California
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Oh
An instance of realization
A moment of contemplation
A series of connecting thoughts
Oh
A feeling of disappointment
The after-effect of poison
Give up everything for which you've fought
Oh
Reality stays and settles in
The death of hope and optimism
You're calling fantasy's bluff
Oh, well


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on Dec. 3 2011 at 1:21 pm
WishfulWisp BRONZE, Sherwood Park, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is my heart-kill it like a wild beast and I will be killed with it. Rip it from me and it will die with me. But tell me what weakens it and I will make it prosper.

I really like the rhythm in this poem. It flows so nicely, I can almost imagine it to music. Well done!