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A Hate/Love Relationship MAG

May 23, 2010
By Anonymous

Was it always your plan to sabotage my life and make it your own?
To run a string of emotions through my body and puppet me with it?
You, manipulative charmer, you.
You, man unbearable, man irresistible.
You, the water-damaged pages of my diary.
You,whom I love in a melancholic sense of the word.
I don't know how to think when I'm with you.
Inanimate ragdoll, naive and so vulnerable to your sweet talk.
You write my script, but you're also the leading man.
Dictate my next move, sir, because I don't know what to do.


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J.Chap BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:16 pm
J.Chap BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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I loved everything about this poem! I love the way you wrote it, I love the message behind it, I loved the word choice. I just thought it was amazing. I was in a very controlling relationship for 10 months and completely relate to this poem. Wonderful job. Keep up the good work! :)

on Apr. 18 2011 at 8:02 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

"You, whom I love in a melancholic sense of the word"

Thank you for putting into words the feelings that I've been trying to figure out. That was beautiful.


on Apr. 15 2011 at 4:12 pm
shy-writer GOLD, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We're young. We don't need, a boy to love, hold, kiss. We won't always be able to relax and be kids, but we'll always be able to love. So I'm going to get out there and liven up this world, leave my mark, make a difference." -Anonymous

Omg! I love it! It's awesome! :D