Purple Rain

May 23, 2010
By gsigniski BRONZE, Ringgold, Georgia
gsigniski BRONZE, Ringgold, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Never regret anything because at one time it was exactly what you wanted.

You see them dance to purple rain..
while the other girl sits at home..
a teardrop of blood rolls down her cheek and she pours out her heart and soul onto paper.. losing her best friend.. trapped forever in a prison.. surrounded by memories of distant life, distant love, distant truth.. doubting her self-existance.. she is like a wilted flower.. slowly losing her appetite.. dying more and more until she fades away.. does anyone care? about the being that loves you unconditionaly, even though you don't deserve it.. it's time to give up, to give in.. to the world she once knew.. and the world she will come to know again.. she needs to be saved.. in whose heart does she belong?

The author's comments:
I felt alone in this world. My best friend was drifting away, my boyfriend.. well thats another story. I hope people can understand that sometimes teens feel like they don't belong.

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kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:01 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

Very good and very relatable :)

on Jun. 16 2010 at 1:33 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

i think everyone should understand that. i don't believe there to be one person in existence that hasn't felt alone at some point. your poem was very well written, i liked it


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