May 23, 2010
By yothatswatted BRONZE, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
yothatswatted BRONZE, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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I sat quietly,
For a moment,
I sat.
Sat quietly,
Then I began,
began to tap,
tap my foot.
A nervous habit
kicking in.
And a whisper
filled my ears.
Then I held my breath,
I began to smile.
I had to hold back
my laugh.
I felt whole,
and uncontrollably
I felt as if
I was walking on cloud nine.
Bright emotions washed over me,
took over me,
ruled me.
First-class spirits
surrounded me.
They howled in laughter,
following my lead.
I was free,
and free of captivity.

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on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:36 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was soooo good ! Don't stop writing your so good :) Come check out my poems , thank youu :)

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 1:53 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I LOVE it!! Its beautiful to say the least :)


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