An Analysis of Love

May 23, 2010
1) - Love is a hindrance,
a torture,
a snag in your life
which prevents you from growing,

2) becoming,
who you really are.
Can that be called Love?
This foul description of a word
so perfectly shaped to fit your life.
So cool
and reassuring
to the

so perfectly smooth.
8) Or
is it only thought (thinking)
by the seemingly wise- am i?
to be perfect?
CTRL) Is this description only meant to be a judgment
to question our lives?
What of true love?
Can it be expressed
through a kiss
a hug
or (fn)
is it more that is put to the test (testing, testing- 1,2,4)
when asked to be perfect.
Will it be put to shame
burnt, mocked, and tortured
burnt, mocked, and tortured
burnt, mocked, and tortured ect.
analyze- I am
why this word cannot be described as perfect
Is mankind too selfish to manage
(manage |?manij|
1 [ trans. ] be in charge of (a company, establishment, or

undertaking); administer; run : their elder son managed the farm.)

the true reality of Love
in the way that Love
asks in return
in the way that (study)

1) you must strive to earn that cool drink
2)you must brave the storm in order to reach shore
you must fight the battle in order to earn victory
we think (thinking) we deserve this
wholesome- is it really wholegrain? - thing
this ready made package of
wonderful life (living)
but to toil is to earn and love can be our reward

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Jun. 17, 2010 at 8:31 pm
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Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:41 am
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kenna2013 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 1:42 pm

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