A broken promise and a fading heart

May 18, 2010
By INnaturegirl GOLD, New Albany, Indiana
INnaturegirl GOLD, New Albany, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"To me frealess doesnt mean living without fears, its not bing completly unfaraid. To me fearless is living inspite of the things that scare you the most." ~Taylor Swift

A broken promise and a fading heart
One day he promised me…
“Our love is permanent”
as he drew a heart on my hand with the black marker.
Months later his eyes turned dark with resentment for me,
like the sky in middle spring just before the storm hits.
One day it rained and he was gone.
And like the heart drawn in “permanent” ink on my pale hand,
Our love quickly faded away with the rain

The author's comments:
i dont think this is very good but yeah whatever im sleepy right now. this isn't exactly slef-inspired i just hate it when guys lie about their intentions!!!

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