May 20, 2010
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Freedom, Freedom
Bloody beach

Children, Children
Ours to teach

Bomber, Bomber
In the crowd

Silence, Silence
Ever proud

Oceans, Oceans
Empty shore
Empty Earth forever more

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:05 pm
Wow... it goes like a creeping nursery rhyme. Gave me chills. The only thing was that I didn't understand how an "empty world" fit in with fighting for freedom. I know not everything in poetry is supposed to be completely within the reader's grasp, but I am curious to see what you were thinking with that.
Ellen2x2 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 11:43 pm
So I was thinking that freedom always has a price. In this case the price was the ultimate, death. Not just one death but the death of the world.
sleeplessdreamer replied...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 1:51 pm
Hmmmmm.... yeah I could see that. Either way, it was fabulous. Thanks for explaining.
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