Freedom

May 20, 2010
By Ellen2x2 GOLD, North Scituate, Rhode Island
Ellen2x2 GOLD, North Scituate, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not random, you just can't think as fast as me.


Freedom, Freedom
Bloody beach

Children, Children
Ours to teach

Bomber, Bomber
In the crowd

Silence, Silence
Ever proud

Oceans, Oceans
Empty shore
Empty Earth forever more


The author's comments:
Freedom always has a price

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on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:51 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Hmmmmm.... yeah I could see that. Either way, it was fabulous. Thanks for explaining.

Ellen2x2 GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:43 pm
Ellen2x2 GOLD, North Scituate, Rhode Island
11 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not random, you just can't think as fast as me.

So I was thinking that freedom always has a price. In this case the price was the ultimate, death. Not just one death but the death of the world.

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:05 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Wow... it goes like a creeping nursery rhyme. Gave me chills. The only thing was that I didn't understand how an "empty world" fit in with fighting for freedom. I know not everything in poetry is supposed to be completely within the reader's grasp, but I am curious to see what you were thinking with that.


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