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Honey Moon Fazed

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You don't even know
Virgin kisses are so sweet,
But you're headed directly toward
Annihilation.

The honeymoon phase
Is lovely...for now.
But wait till the stars shine
On the truth.

My time is running out
See if I care.
The message rings true.
You're going too fast

The love you two have is
Being used up too fast
Like air on the moon
Or shampoo.

So now your retorts angered me
The periods at the end of this stanza
Is only there so I could
Stab the paper when I wrote it.

So shut up and confront yourself.
Don't ask for my help anymore.
Be annoying to your girlfriend.
(Who will soon break your heart).




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logo24 said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 8:06 pm:
I think you're right Elijah :)
 
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ElijahN said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 1:26 pm:
what i got from this: is that maybe the narrator is watching the person she loves be with someone else, and she says that she can wait patientally as she breaks his heart, and she'll be the rebound only if he doesn't take too long. the narrator says that "the honeymoon phase is lovely for now" meaning that the fake lovey dovey relationship they have won't last long? anyway, AMAZING poem.
 
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Jun. 17, 2010 at 7:25 pm :

yeah...almost ;)

just a friend really

 
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