Honey Moon Fazed

May 20, 2010
By xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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You don't even know
Virgin kisses are so sweet,
But you're headed directly toward
Annihilation.

The honeymoon phase
Is lovely...for now.
But wait till the stars shine
On the truth.

My time is running out
See if I care.
The message rings true.
You're going too fast

The love you two have is
Being used up too fast
Like air on the moon
Or shampoo.

So now your retorts angered me
The periods at the end of this stanza
Is only there so I could
Stab the paper when I wrote it.

So shut up and confront yourself.
Don't ask for my help anymore.
Be annoying to your girlfriend.
(Who will soon break your heart).


The author's comments:
Only a matter of time...

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on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:06 pm
homewardbound, Billerica, Massachusetts
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I think you're right Elijah :)

on Jun. 17 2010 at 7:25 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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yeah...almost ;)

just a friend really


on Jun. 17 2010 at 1:26 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

what i got from this: is that maybe the narrator is watching the person she loves be with someone else, and she says that she can wait patientally as she breaks his heart, and she'll be the rebound only if he doesn't take too long. the narrator says that "the honeymoon phase is lovely for now" meaning that the fake lovey dovey relationship they have won't last long? anyway, AMAZING poem.


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