Haunting Eyes

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I think I love you, dearest one
Your haunting eyes, your smiling face
I think you're beautiful
You think I'm a disgrace
No I won't get out of here
Faintly, I fear
That our end is near...
No I will not leave your sight.
Want to stay with you all night
With you life is all right
Your haunting eyes are slicing into my heart.

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ElijahN said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 1:16 pm
hahaha this is cool.
ElijahN replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 8:11 pm
what's been up?
XenonG replied...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 10:18 am
not much you? i love your new works
ElijahN replied...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 11:19 am
thank you. have you rated and commented? and you haven't posted anything new
XenonG replied...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 4:49 pm

yeah i haven't in awhile hah. I will soon


ElijahN replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 4:14 pm
lies, Xenon!
XenonG replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 6:52 pm
:( :( sorry i was at camp ahaa..
ElijahN replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 2:47 pm
hahaha it's cool.
xenon333 replied...
Dec. 13, 2015 at 3:46 pm
how are you? five years later. i shouldn't even be still on this site but, i remembered it the other day, @ElijahN
Eli N replied...
Dec. 13, 2015 at 7:28 pm
I'm making it! In college rn. I totally forgot my password and email for this site haha. I recently came out with a self-published poetry book over the summer actually! @xenon333
Eli N replied...
Dec. 13, 2015 at 7:29 pm
It's wonderful to hear from you btw!! @xenon333
xenon333 replied...
today at 9:59 am
A self published book! What's it called? @ElijahN?
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