Another Life

May 15, 2010
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Have you ever wondered if there's even a point?
For all of these years we live to dissapoint.
Days upon days,
Years upon years.
I wish we could just sleep forever
To contain all of our peers.
This life may seem simple
But deep within it could easily crimple.
The longer it lasts, the more painful it becomes.
As long as it seems, your life seems to hum.
So answer this question.
What is this life?
Is it just a dream?
Or are we just reliving someone else's life?

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christin.bass said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:27 pm
It was a great idea, but i agree it was too rhymey. But over all it sent a great message good job! Check out my work if you have time. (:
Britney15 said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 1:28 pm
I like the idea behind this poem but i think it would send a stronger message if it wasn't rhymed. THe image you chose is very beautiful
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