Trial

June 10, 2010
By , Hyde Park, VT
Another day
The sky is grey
as i sit her
dressed in fear
You hold my fate
there's no debate
No, not for me
I'm history
Because Juvie's not the place for me
But you want me there
You don't give a care
But i do
Sometimes wrong
but wrongs can be overwritten
Even though
I know i've biten
the hand that feeds me
But nobody needs me
So i might as well
just go to hell





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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 8:13 pm
thought-provokingly strange. fun to read out loud while swaying back and forth
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 11:41 am
Awesome!  I love it and its flow.  One thing that i would change: the rhyming is a little generic and doesn't fit quite right.  Don't get me wrong!  I love the rhyming!  Just the word choice doesn't seem quite right.
 
carcar11 said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 5:47 pm
omg that was so good i loved it it has real emotion
 
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