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A Path to Death This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

By , Falls Church, VA
A deeper tug that pulls at
The corners of my heavy heart
Like a minnow pulling away from the line
A sigh that is the intake
Of breath
That takes up all my strength
I am ashes soaring in the wind
A million pieces of dust
Settling down to Earth
My will is gone
Crushed by the lack
Of care
A sharp pang
A small twinge
Of regret
That I couldn't have done
Just a little bit more
Freedom's teasing just like
A swift breeze in the summer sun
Gone
Lack of care, lack of sleep
Is what pulses through me
Death, death, death
As I write this last farewell …

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Mikki said...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 5:47 pm
Great Job!!
 
TB English Teacher said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 9:56 pm
I can tell this author really "felt" what the characters were feeling.  The poem is very expressive and heartfelt.  Super job on use of figurative language! 
 
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