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Fighting

May 18, 2010
By Anonymous

Arguing.
I hear voices screaming on the top of there lungs
Back and forth.
Kids Crying and begging them to stop.
Hiding.
It's like world war three in this house
They put on a fake smile in of everyone like it's okay
I go to my world and put my headphones in
Hope.
Strength.
Courage.
One day i heard slam and i knew the war was over.



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on Jun. 13 2010 at 9:09 pm
Sheenaxhydia BRONZE, Somerset, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"sometimes you have to do things you never did to get things you never hadd"

thankyouuu..it was suppose to be i heard the door slam...butt i likee that one better nd i will keep writingg

on Jun. 13 2010 at 9:07 pm
Sheenaxhydia BRONZE, Somerset, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"sometimes you have to do things you never did to get things you never hadd"

awwww...thankyouu nd suree ill look over some of ur stuff

on Jun. 12 2010 at 12:29 pm
Gwenthegreat BRONZE, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Live like you will die tomorrow, and dream like you will live forever."

I really love this poem, especially how choppy it is. Would you mind reading some of my work?

on Jun. 11 2010 at 12:00 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow -- i absolutely love your ending. metaphorical or not, it definitely left a mark in my mind. it is such a fabulous way to end this type of poem.

this creates not quite a beautiful imagine in my mind, but it is definitely vivid and that's what shows a good author.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. thx so much for posting this and i look forward to reading more from you.

keep writing! (: