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June 7, 2010
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why waste todays time
on tommorow
when tommorow may never come
waste todays time on today
waste tommorows time on tommorow
for that is wwhat it is for





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freezewing This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 6:44 pm
so true! good poem!
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 11:19 am
i like how it kind of takes you in a circle
 
Anne1 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 11:54 am
i meant it to for it was two but than i cind made one
 
emoVamp247 said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 7:42 pm
this poem is cool i like it.
 
imrighthereyouknow said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 6:59 pm
i really like this, it has nice flow. great job :)
 
Anne1 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 11:55 am

thanks

 

 
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